Harr.

*CRACK!*

*Cheap shot*

-"But this whelp possessed no markings, the entirety of his fur a solid color."

First mark of speshulness, and herald of homggreat things to come. Yay.

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nothing else...

*Vanish*

Aw, I'm not the first reviewer. I blame you, since you posted it only a few moments before I left, and fictionpress was on the fritz.

Anyway, I'll say what I said in the guild on Gaia. You've done a lot more with the story than you originally did, which I guess is normal for a rewrite, but yeah, thought I'd comment on that.

Good job with the names ^^ Native American names, and that specific Abenaki one -Alakws- rock for wolves, since they're somewhat primitive and don't need to worry about special, modern names.

And, as always, Chris rocks xP Keep it up with him, and I hope you don't have to do another rewrite... cuz I wanna know what happens =( without you sending me an outline or anything... even though you already have xD

ANYWAY. To wrap this up, I leave you with that statement I stole from you, which you stole from someone else.

Write on. (And Rock on, in the name of all that is rock)

I love animals. This was a great description of a mother wolf with her cubs. Everything was real, you made the words come to life. This was great. Keep writing!