Sososo wonderful.
Every word was strung together with perfection.

konichi wa

I can't exactly remember how/where I found out about your other penname. I think it might have been from the first chapter of 'Fragments.' Wherever I found it, I decided to check out some of the poems/stories you've got on it - since I love all your other ones.

I don't have time to read them all now, but I just wanted to start. After exams end, I'll probably be able to read more of them. In the meantime, though: How beautifully poetic. There's no other way to describe this. You should use some (if not all) of these lines in a chapter in 'Fragments.'

I had no favorites; every single word was perfect in this poem (and - for that reason - it gets added to my favorites list ... no surprises there *grin).

Interesting take on a person (or, in this case, angel) fallen from grace. You have some wonderful images in here, like "her halo shattered into sparkling angel dust" and "while still adorned in all her velvet and lace." I think what helps this poem is your use of strong verbs, and the rhyme scheme helps to solidify the fairy tale feeling. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

god, this is so beautiful. the imagery, the metaphors. each word is perfection. lovely job.

SPEECHLESS. I love the rhyme scheme. And wow... Just everything. The whole thing was written so beautifully. It was vivid, yet abstract, powerful, yet delicate. Bravo. Pure genius.