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| lilcatfish96 2008-06-29 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! Another fantastic piece of work! Love your stuff! |
| Kura-sama 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAw...cute story. Makes me happy after Unreal made me depressed ^^ |
| Oyoa 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abuseM... even better. Romantic vampires with english accents... yep... you've stolen the other half of my hear m'dear. You and Sukidayo... *sigh* |
| ess3sandra 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abusethe entire one-shot was kinda dark and then wam, a sappy ending, made it more fictionlike than real, before that sentence it was more real rel then fiction real, but since this is supposed to be ficiton it became fiction, and by all means, a verry godd one me thinks. so i goota ask, do you beleive in vampires? |
| Songs of an Angel 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseNICE! Although it left me hanging! :P - Songs of an Angel |
| Ck90 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseYES! A VAMPIRE MATE STORY! i LOVE THOSE! And I love the story! |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseomgomgomg i LOVE this! i wish i could have a happy ending like this! lol! xoxo and all that jazz Velvet |
| Gothgod 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good happy ending after reading Unreal. |
| atreyu love 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseaww. its so cute ;] |
| Sexy Vampire Princess 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseSounds good so far. Looking foward to the next chapter. LOL |
| Moonlit Promise 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I know you wrote this sotry a while ago and everything but I just wanted to tell you that I liked this! ^^ You write so well! And, though I wish there was more, I really like it. :3 I'm gonna read more of your stuff! ^^! Whee! I hope you keep writing 'cause you rock. xD |
| windcriesjimi 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseaw... i like this one. |
| WickedSilence 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I can feel the girl's (woman's??) emotional rocking back and forth; and it always makes my heart just melt thinking how absolutely romantic it is for the girl to have a guy completely devoted to her like that. The only problem I had with the whole thing was the part where he said she was his mate. How in the world did the girl/woman know that he is a vampire? It didn't make any sense. She just talked about it without explaining how she arrived at that conclusion. However, the end was superb. I like how you wrapped it up, cutting off her past life with the new by addressing the family/friends situation. And the last line might seem a little cheesy, but it's also too cute. |
| Rakasha Shadowfang 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseAw that was sweet, no angst, no horror, just pure, untainted, well-written romance, thanks, i haven't read a story like this in over a year. |
| Albino Peacock 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseyay i love this! sorry it took me so long to review pretty purple eyes...m |