Very telling and contemplative. The play format is extremely effective. I just love how simple and yet how powerful it is. Great work.

This seems more like the first poem than the others do. The first poem seemed like she was sad that she felt nothing, not even the pain. Here it seems the love has fizzled into hate and, well, that's my interpretation. Anywho, your poetry is beautiful. As always. Later.

This sounds sad, like she's a tad hopeless.

This one seems a little more straight forward. She lives on the 7th floor and she won't let him or her explain. But with poetry one can never be sure.

Hello. I just love your wording and your diction which is so simple that it's not simple at all. So what I get from this upon reading it the fourth time is that she has writer's block? And the vibrations are the echoes of her past words.

Interesting writing style... I like how you included those "stage directions" (don't know what to call them), they really make these short pieces come alive... keep writing! :)

Beautiful image, great use of descriptive notes within the work, its a hard thing to pull off but you have done it well. Thanks for the review, I have had so little since I returned. I am of the "old" fictionpress crowd, before things like review replies and forums. I, unlike most of the new crowd put my returning comments in reviews.

Apologies for the delay, mainly been writing this weekend

Good luck in all your works.

N.I.

WOW! is all i can say..im spechless really...

Really liked the last 2 lines, which brought across a subtle agony and which somehow made sense...good phrasing there! do keep writing!

Interesting use of parenthesis..in this case they seem like stage directions...giving the piece an eerie theatricality...

Interesting format for a poem. I don't think I've ever seen something like this before. Points for originality. I especially like the last line. So sad and fleeting. Keep writing! :)

God. So simple, and yet so powerful. Nice job. Lets the readers think for themselves, but it's still so powerful.

Suicide.

An end to all ends.

Wow. I liked this little collection of pieces. They were short and breif but that gave them alot more meaning I think.

I think it sort of gave a feeling of shortening of days... of a tired life... of a tormented numb soul.

Very good collection.

Bravo.

Write on.

O a dream turned almost nightmare... or a constant reminder.

I sort of get the feeling someone passed on...thats just my little take on this... a twist maybe..


Sort of like you cant get them out of your mind or body or soul.You think its that they play tricks on you.

Just my take...moving on...

Hm life just going on and on and on... everyday the same.

It's a very sad feeling...

I took "vibrations" to be the heart just slowly beating... you feel it grinding but you dont want to. Its a constant numbing ache.. you eventually forget about it.

Moving on...