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Reviews For: Mickey and Me

Portrait of Daybreak
2008-03-01
ch 1,
"Wrote it for a school project a long time ago."

Pretty liberal school you got there, eh? :)) Lucky. Hahahaha.

Not bad, though the ending isn't my favorite.
xfail
2007-08-30
ch 1,
I really enjoyed this. The emotions are very well-developed, and you managed to develop your characters vividly in such a short time. It's interesting how you left some things to the imagination, which I like. Keep people guessing. I would love to give you constructive criticism, but I cannot see anything worth changing at the moment. Just keep up the good work. You're on your way to becoming a phenomenal writer.
Do you plan on updating anything here in the near future, or are you sticking with deviantart?
UtopiaGlam
2006-12-14
ch 1,
I absolutely LOVE this story!
As a painter I really appreciate the way you like describing, it's like when I make the painting spurt on my canvas or papers, you just throw emotions and feelings that make the reader really SEE through the eyes and heart of your main characters.
Thank you for writing so well
Fool of Amaranthine
2006-12-03
ch 1,
I liked this. It was sad, and almost real. Like a memory or a horrible dream. Too bad it's a oneshot.
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