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| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseso sad, but we've all felt this way before. Good job. --ShookieInLove |
| Charity F 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThis one sounds so in rhythm and connected. i supposed the consistent 4 line stanzas helped with that. I also like your use of repetition and this particular style is really cool. Keep it up! |
| simpleplan13 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusethis is very bittersweet and very relateable.. I like it a lot.. well done... I like the ending especially |
| les petits bateaux 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abusebittersweet. as always, i think we've all gone through this before. sigh. lovely, as always. |
| ohthevoices 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI like how easy it was to relate to this poem. Keep writing! |
| Aquafied 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseimpossible dreams i am floating in the loveliness of this. it has a nostalgic quality that relates to later life |
| Jay-Ling 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseDeep. You're an awsome writer. |
| Lhune 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseOh... very beautifully written (as I am used of you) I am sure there are many who can recognise themselves in this poem (not myself I'm afraid as I don't see the same people dayly on the train :D ) However, I enjoyed reading this very much and hope to read a new one soon. |
| The Postscript 2006-12-03 ch 1, | abuseNice write - this reminds me of something said to me today, that hope is the coatrack on which we hang our dreams. This little phrase still has me intrigued, as well as this poem. Great work. Keep writing, k. |