so sad, but we've all felt this way before. Good job.
--ShookieInLove

This one sounds so in rhythm and connected. i supposed the consistent 4 line stanzas helped with that.

I also like your use of repetition and this particular style is really cool. Keep it up!

this is very bittersweet and very relateable.. I like it a lot.. well done... I like the ending especially

bittersweet. as always, i think we've all gone through this before. sigh. lovely, as always.

I like how easy it was to relate to this poem. Keep writing!

impossible dreams
i am floating in the loveliness of this.


it has a nostalgic quality
that relates to later life

Deep. You're an awsome writer.

Oh... very beautifully written
(as I am used of you)
I am sure there are many who can recognise themselves in this poem (not myself I'm afraid as I don't see the same people dayly on the train :D )
However, I enjoyed reading this very much
and hope to read a new one soon.

Nice write - this reminds me of something said to me today, that hope is the coatrack on which we hang our dreams. This little phrase still has me intrigued, as well as this poem. Great work. Keep writing, k.