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| just you and me 2006-12-03 ch 1,  | abuseHmm.. I liked this poem. I could really feel your emotions through it. I have problems with my father, too, but not this bad. Other kinds. I don't know how to really explain it, but a poem of mine I have posted explains it. The only problem I had with this poem was the rhyming. It was good in some spots, but others just made me cringe. I really liked the line, "To rip out his soul and throw it on this page". That one was a good one =). Anyways, all around it was a very nice poem. -Jackie |