I like this one too... I like that she was mature enough to see that if they don't get along, maybe they won't work out.

wow. I like the subtle hint of at least a future. lol
Even though it didn't end with a cliche, I loved the dose of reality in there. I also loved the idea of not jumping into a world wind of romance almost immediately. Love takes time, or so they say, so kudos for a wonderful, well written one shot.

I'm loving Luke. Haha ^^

I don't get it. I really don't want to be so blunt, but really. Does that mean she gets together with that asshole or not? Though those masks are usually part of who people are. Didn't Shakespeare sat that "For the world's just a stage, and all the people are merely players" or something with that meaning? Doesn't that mean we all wear a mask, one way or another? And even though I confess I did like the story, I think both Luke and Amie are a bit dense, and I can't figure them out. Maybe it has to do with my wonderful people skills, but I do have friends and people don't really hate me, so... Gah! If you can, can you please explain this to dumb old me? I swear I'd appreciate it so much. And it would be only fair, considering I'm usually a one-line review sot of person.

That was sad...but hopeful at the same time. I liked how they controlled themselves. It was really good!

wow!

Awesome. Just plain awesome. It would be really good if you show us abit into the future though. Like, how their lives are after they got together. But seriously its a good oneshot :D

Oh, yay published like two years ago, lol.

But that's not the point.

Usually i'm not up for reading one-shots, but this one i loved! Your descriptions were great, and I loved the kiss, haha. I also liked how you didn't leave it a cliche by having her decide to not date him. Which is something I would usually wring a writer's neck for lol. I mean taking away the cliche-ness, lol.

it's like i wished she would have dated him, buut thats not what you intended, and it still came out awesome as shiyat.

i'm a sucker for some romantic cliches, lol.

I know I mentioned that I had to sleep, buut I saw this one-shot and kind of forgot about sleep, haha.

I might go check out some more of your stuff =3

Oh wow! I hope he does change. It was really sweet, you managed to pull off the cliched kiss in the rain really well. Well done! =D

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Well, at least there's hope...right? Aw, that was kind of depressing. But those were some pretty fantastic kisses, I must say. And in my imagination, Amie comes to her senses later. Once Luke stops wearing masks, which in my imagination, does happen. This was really well written...if it wasn't, I wouldn't be this depressed now. I have to go read something cliche.

I'm not sure how I feel about this one, only because of the indefinite ending. I guess it just depends on the readers outlook on life. However, it was well written and very detailed; which I enjoyed. I've been reading your one-shot's and I am loving your writing so far.

aw this was really cute!! =) and not what u expected. haha. it has like the clique part yet its still really original.

that was really good! Loved it!

yeah it is different but i don't think it's realistic since you have that plot. i mean n the end, they could never resist each other from stealing kisses or moments or whatever right? so they'd only be hung up..

Aw. How cute.

I didn't realise this was a one shot until you said it was at the end! I expected it to be this horrendously long thing with lots of drama but I'm glad it wasn't. I liked how you left it sort of open ended to the readers imagination. The last line was definitely a winner!