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Ama-sk8 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseOh, yay published like two years ago, lol. But that's not the point. Usually i'm not up for reading one-shots, but this one i loved! Your descriptions were great, and I loved the kiss, haha. I also liked how you didn't leave it a cliche by having her decide to not date him. Which is something I would usually wring a writer's neck for lol. I mean taking away the cliche-ness, lol. it's like i wished she would have dated him, buut thats not what you intended, and it still came out awesome as shiyat. i'm a sucker for some romantic cliches, lol. I know I mentioned that I had to sleep, buut I saw this one-shot and kind of forgot about sleep, haha. I might go check out some more of your stuff =3
gulistanlik 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseOh wow! I hope he does change. It was really sweet, you managed to pull off the cliched kiss in the rain really well. Well done! =D gulistanlik
Artemis of the Golden Apple 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseWell, at least there's hope...right? Aw, that was kind of depressing. But those were some pretty fantastic kisses, I must say. And in my imagination, Amie comes to her senses later. Once Luke stops wearing masks, which in my imagination, does happen. This was really well written...if it wasn't, I wouldn't be this depressed now. I have to go read something cliche.
jane speaks 2008-01-02 ch 1,	abuseI'm not sure how I feel about this one, only because of the indefinite ending. I guess it just depends on the readers outlook on life. However, it was well written and very detailed; which I enjoyed. I've been reading your one-shot's and I am loving your writing so far.
x3life 2007-12-09 ch 1,	abuseaw this was really cute!! =) and not what u expected. haha. it has like the clique part yet its still really original.
zanessa1215 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abusethat was really good! Loved it!
OrangeStar13 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseyeah it is different but i don't think it's realistic since you have that plot. i mean n the end, they could never resist each other from stealing kisses or moments or whatever right? so they'd only be hung up..
your harbor 2007-06-25 ch 1,	abuseAw. How cute.
wandless 2007-04-24 ch 1,	abuseI didn't realise this was a one shot until you said it was at the end! I expected it to be this horrendously long thing with lots of drama but I'm glad it wasn't. I liked how you left it sort of open ended to the readers imagination. The last line was definitely a winner!
xxxstarlightxxx 2007-02-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is great...really good..really great actually... I am so tired though... But you are a very good writer type person... poor john... noo...it was Luke, wasn't it... gahh... but anyways...good sotyr..
ccaltuna13 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseI liked it. The ending was bittersweet, I guess, but you did a really good job with it.
a bitter kiss. 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseaw, that was so bittersweet... but you really described the kiss well! :D And yeah, haha, what happened to the dog? :P
jekodama 2006-12-11 ch 1,	abuseA character that defied the cliché... interesting. What happened with the dog in the end?
Sally Can Wait 2006-12-10 ch 1,	abuseUGH, you loser. Why are you so good at writing? dropkicks you Okay not really. Because I'm spineless. Except last night when we went to the theatre (in the really high up cheap seats xD), this lady kept leaning forward and sitting up as high as she could so that her head was blocking literally a third of the stage (that's how high we were), so I kicked her chair. And she sat back down. Or maybe her back just got tired because she was kind of old. But whatever. The point is: uh... I liked this a lot. Because it was honest and shiz. And...it's 8:10 a.m. so don't expect anything too intelligent, but... yeah. Luke reminds me of my friend Joe xD Except not. Because Joe is this annoying little freshman kid. Only perverted. BUT OMG WHAT ABOUT THE DOG?! UGH! WHAT IF IT DIED? It probably died because you forgot about it. I mean, I kept expecting it to come running in Homeward Bound style when they were kissing, but no. She just completely forgot about it! Stupid fartknocker. Poor Luke :(. sigh...yawn (not because of your story, because of the time. fajwelkjg). Well, that pretty much sucks for him. Too bad he wasn't a poser, or Amie might have gone out with him. This reminds me of this girl I know who's really quiet and bookish (but awesome) and her older brother(who is obnoxious)'s best friend, who is also obnoxious. I think. At least, he probably is because her brother is. And he's supposedly really hot but if he's who I'm thinking of, his eyes are really close together. And it makes him look like he's about to sprout a unibrow even though he's not really. But the point is, she (Suzy) has a crush on said older brother (Scott)'s best friend (Nick). Because I know you wanted to know those names. And he could conciveably like her too, except that her brother defintley has a problem with this, and they are very opposite. Like, not even compatable opposite. But OMG. Even though you made a fantabulous amazing point with this story, I must tell you these lyrics I heard, that I could concievably write a story based upon. "Kissing someone who's too much like you is like kissin' on a mirror." UGH. Brilliance. I love this person, (Um...Jenny Lewis? I think.), because she is so capable of putting feelings into words. Like Ben Folds. WHO I SAW IN PERSON! POMIGOSH. I walked the same ground which he walked. Well, probably not, because I was up in the really high seats (not last night, a different night). BUT THAT'S BESIDE THE POINT. Ugh. I can't even imagine how long this review is now. And I forgot the point. Oh. No, wait, it left me again. Okay, so I'm still trying to think of a plot for a serious story, because your words are haunting me. Ha, ha, just kidding. Sort of. But seriously, (no pun intended), I have an idea that I could see myself going through with, but I'm not sure how serious it would end up being, because I'm not serious. I have perfume called serious. It's a spinoff of Britney Spears's perfume curious. Not thinking straight, -Sally P.S. This is def. your best rejection story yet. It had a feeling of complete completeness.
Alenor 2006-12-07 ch 1,	abuseok, i thought i'd like this and i did, up until the point when she decided that for the good of them both she would have to crush his hopes and walk away. i don't like that, if she had wanted it enough she would have tried for it and given it the effort such a thing deserves. social boundaries shouldn't stop things like that and for her to decided that they were just too different before she even gave it a chance is basically like saying that she didn't care enough for him to even bother trying. so, i'm sorry but i don't like the ending. if you ever do decide that this is more than a one-shot i'd be happy to read and see what happens but i get the feeling you won't. bye ~ Alenor.

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