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| Volo Purus. 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is probably the only thing I have ever said this for: Please tell me that that's a one-shot! It was beautiful. I'm marking it as a favorite! |
| Circus 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseYou're amazing. This is a new high point. I can't even express how much I love this story. Your imagery is perfect, and your characters are crystal-clear and brilliant, shining out from the page and becoming so real that the reader can nearly hear a whisper of their (incredibly beautiful and clean) conversation. Good job. |
| Ruelle 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant - having no idea where the story was going until the very ending, but being good enough to retain my attention... "Good enough" doesn't describe it at all, I think your style is entrancing. Makes me want to read some more, and I will, soon :) |
| EnigmaticArsenic 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseyou do know i love you, right? seriously- everything you write is always so gorgeous. the imagery and that bit of story book lethargy, something i would love to draw would my hand stop being such a shiftless jerk and do as my brain commands it, but sigh le sigh. i have no such patience for paintings anway. but really though- should you ever publish anything, an anthology of these sorts or anything for that matter, you know i would be the first to buy, right? (not so) happy endings are always the best. |