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Activist in Training 2007-11-06 ch 9,	abuseThis story is SO CUTE. I'm still trying to clean up the mess I made when I exploded due to the cuteness of Rae and Scott. Look at what you made me do xD! -holds out piles of oozing Activist that for some reason smell like lemon cookies and pine trees- Uh... I would give you constructive critisism too but alas I suck at grammar and such... sowy -insert sad face-
Jayjack 2007-08-22 ch 9,	abuseohh baby baby. mom is a little obsessed with Rach & Scott. Too bad for Keith. Scott so likes her duhh. update soon.
Jayjack 2007-08-22 ch 8,	abusewow. they BOTH like her.. hmm interesting neighbor=potential boyfriend.
Jayjack 2007-08-22 ch 3,	abuseaww but it was cute for being short she likes him yay!
MonkeyMohawk1 2007-07-18 ch 9,	abuseyay!!..a new chappie i was a lil late on reading but hey! i love the chappie..alright now dnt 4get to update dude! peacee!
Songs of an Angel 2007-07-05 ch 9,	abusecool! now i finally read the right chapter! the last part is really really cute! :P
Songs of an Angel 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abuseyay! you finally updated! anyway...i still enjoy your writing!! I easily understand what you're trying to say, and at the same time, the way you write amuses me. Your story, I noticed, is written in a way that would make it sound humorous, and I really like that. Aside from that, I can't wait for more things to happen!! Mor einteraction between Scott and Rae :D UPDATE SOON :D
a little girl 2007-07-03 ch 9,	abusehehehhe after um... how many years of waiting... hahah :P just kidding (as if i also update regularly) hehehe... i think you forgot the letter "t" somewhere for "at" heheh... just saw it :D well anyways... Scott's so sweet compared to keith... heheh raechel's just being blind hehehhe c: nice chapter josefa! c: hope you'll update SOON! -a little girl c:
psychotic aiba lover 2007-07-02 ch 9,	abuseScotteh...ahaha! 'What's with the third person?' Happy Octopus asks her. o_O What? Where did the Happy Octopus come from? Strange… Oh my god. She’s a schizophrenic! gasp sitting up and eying the guy.  eyeing, a reason why you should use Microsoft word. Haha. "Doesn't mean I'm the one who game them."  game them… gave? :) Keith?! Hahah! Cheesy pick up line. Sad. Hahah! Aww. Scott and Rae are talking and teasing. :) That’s so adorable! Hahah, you know, when you mentioned Blake, the first person that came to my mind was Blake Lewis. :) HAHAHAHA! Cheerleader discrimination! The cheering thing was SO funny! HAHAHAH! coldly eying the cheerleaders standing on a small-ish platform in front of the crowd.  Okay, now I don’t know. Is it eyeing or eying? :\| If it’s eying, then I’ve been wrong all my life. ;( Woofy? Hahah! Wow. But aww! Scott and Rae are together, just the two of them. evil smile :) ! Why did Scott leave?! BUT AW! That’s so freaking cute! Meeting Scott’s eyes! (although, I hate his name :) ) And he even got her wrist! I slap myself with my free hand. Gah! Shut up! o_O She’s like you! HAHAH!! That’s so cute! Intertwined. Intertwined?! Repeat after me. Intertwined! AHAHAHAHHA! And Scott blushed! :) Scott turn back to look at the game.  turns. XD Hahah! You know what, I love Kevin the most from your story. Keith is too much of a good guy, Scott’s gonna be taken, Blake-he’s too apathetic. Kevin’s so cute! then she follows beck to April's side.  back or beck? :\| HAHAH! Linda and Kate. Why’s the other guy staring at Rae? Is he gonna bully her for going out with Keith? Oh, and I don’t like Keith anymore! Kevin refused to go with the guys but Keith’s going. Tsk tsk. Keith should learn to be like Kevin. :) Haha! Nad’s way of saying good bye. I swear, she’s one of the best characters in your story. Oh my gahd! Blake smiled towards Nad?! Aww! They’re getting closer! And wtf? Kevin lets his dog go with the other people? Hahah! He’s so darn adorable. Oh. So now, he’s chasing after his dog. Hahah. HE”S SO CUTE! I LOVE KEVIN! Plastic bag? OH MY GOD! SCOTT’S SO ROMANTIC! That was so beautiful. tear the highlight of your story. placing the small poton her crossed arms  You know, I actually thought that poton was a word. Like a mini pot or something. Stupid me. Damn Rae. How could she give the pot to her mom?! AWW! Her mom’s such a sweet mom. :) Ahahah. Scott’s so cute here too. WOOT WOOT! Scott and Rae’s relationship is finally developing! Yeah! Now it’s time for Rae to two-time! Ahahah! SUPER LOVED your chapter! Finally it’s out after months and yeah!! Great job! Update SOON! :)
Pieces of the sun 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseHoly **...I am so confused. "/
kstar129 2007-07-01 ch 6,	abuseSo cute!
kstar129 2007-07-01 ch 2,	abuseI'll take my spork now!I need some more to add to my evil spork monion army.And you need to keep writin.
buzzbuzz 2007-04-18 ch 8,	abuseHaha, yay, update!! At last. I got a little bored in the first part for some reason. But from the part where they stepped out of the party it got better. Especially the end. :) :) Oh wait, I don't get how the rose would get there. Would write a longer review but I gtg...
Kar3b3ar 2007-04-17 ch 8,	abusewow...you foled me. i thought it was keith who liked Rae, but then Scott came in and at first i thought they were friends, but i dunno...now i'm confused. scott likes rae? yes maybe no..ah! i like it a lot, its unique.
kaka 2007-04-16 ch 8, anon.	abusethat was AWESOME. as usual. ;) the chat thing was a cute idea. and scott's so sweet! and it's cool the way rae is slowly liking scott. slowly as in unconsciously. sorry if my review sucks, i'm just freakin hungry right now. :D anyways, i love the way your story is unpredictable. :D ciao.

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