This is so good! GREAT JOB!

wow. i really dig how gone your stuff is. amazing work. i love trippy stuff. (music included) peace (sry bout the beat language) its how i talk

it kind of "gets faster" as i read it. the language and imagry is amazing and its complements the ramdom fantasy of the poem. beautazing! billiente! some-other-word-that-I've-made-up! i love it, keep writing

Amazing use of imagery! Excellent ending note also! I really liked this! Good work!