Is this leading to a story?
its so captivating

please tell me if theres more.
I like it.

I like the plot. I hope you write more! You described things very smoothly but it did seem to jump around making it hard to read. Other than that it was good.

Hey Swanwhite!

Great story so far. There's a few typing errors, but nothing seriously wrong. I can't wait to read more! What's in the letters? Who was the guy (or girl) that took them? I'm very interested...

I left you a review for The Bell and the Hammer at the Lion's Call, if you haven't read it yet. Again, as I said in my review there, thank you so much for telling me about the award!

~Rorimac Underhill

This was pretty intresting , though the sentence structure was kinda childish , but in a good way . Lol shoot I cna't tlak my sentence structre bombs ,but I'm trying to help yah out ^ ^. Anywho I liked how fast pace and your usage of descriptions in this . I think this story ahs some good potential !

Please return the favor and R&R my story Frog's ,Wart's & Kisses . Thank you ^ ^ .

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