omg. most. depressing. story. ever.

it was AWESOME! idk why i have never read it till now but yeah! loved it! when did you write this? during emo sophomore year? so good!

wow. this is an amazing story. thats all i have to say. it was wonderfully well written and...all that other good stuff.

one thing though...“What on earth are you doing here?” he asked quietly, yet frantically."

kiro says that near the beginning of the story. are they even on earth? because if it was a different dimension...i dunno.

but other wise, again, REALLY good story! keep up the good work!

Noelle