Reviews for This Isn't a Poem

magnusthewolf 2007-02-02 ch 1,	abusei quite liked this piece and the raw, powerful beauty of it. great job! write on!
cling peach 2007-01-15 ch 1,	abuse"This isn't a poem...it's desperation" I know that feeling so well. "How can you survive on a diet of daydreams" That is a beautiful line, with the alliteration and just the idea of it. "Like your heart isn’t going crazy with the sigh of his breath" I also really like that. Maybe- probably- because I can relate to it so much. I adore this, not only because it's well written, but because I know it. I love the ending. I love it all! Great work, keep writing.
WinterRaven292 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abuseI loved the line that said, "How can you survive on a diet of daydreams." Or something like that... That's the best analogy I've ever heard. Good job! ~Winter~
Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-12-04 ch 1,	abuseI love this piece. It was beautiful. You actually make my own heart ache... or remember aching, which sometimes someone needs. The first half of the poem was excellent. The first line is wonderful. "how can you love someone so deeply it feels like water" That is the best line i have read all night. Beautiful... I can feel it pressing me. Great piece. Keep up the great writing.