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| Cesalie Chase 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThanks a lot for making me hungry at 12:20 in the morning! But seriously, that was hilarious. I love how you repeated the first four lines in the end - a very nice wrap-up to a silly poem. I enjoyed it very muchly. --Jen |
| fiona phobia 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute, funny, & also slightly sexual? Maybe I just have a dirty mind. Whatever. It made me laugh. |
| obsidiandreams 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked this! It flowed very well and was amusing. |
| crissy 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abusebizarre, but okay. it made me chuckle. and looking at it a second time its still humorous. |
| insert cliche here 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseShel Silverstein-esque poetry has never been so mathy! Honestly, I didn't know you were still writing. Good rhythm and flow and everything, even if it did remind me of 8th grade math class. |