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Reviews For: Fibonacci's Pizza

Cesalie Chase
2006-12-09
ch 1,
abuseThanks a lot for making me hungry at 12:20 in the morning!

But seriously, that was hilarious. I love how you repeated the first four lines in the end - a very nice wrap-up to a silly poem. I enjoyed it very muchly.

--Jen
fiona phobia
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is cute, funny, & also slightly sexual? Maybe I just have a dirty mind. Whatever. It made me laugh.
obsidiandreams
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked this! It flowed very well and was amusing.
crissy
2006-12-04
ch 1,
abusebizarre, but okay. it made me chuckle. and looking at it a second time its still humorous.
insert cliche here
2006-12-04
ch 1,
abuseShel Silverstein-esque poetry has never been so mathy! Honestly, I didn't know you were still writing. Good rhythm and flow and everything, even if it did remind me of 8th grade math class.
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