Thanks a lot for making me hungry at 12:20 in the morning!

But seriously, that was hilarious. I love how you repeated the first four lines in the end - a very nice wrap-up to a silly poem. I enjoyed it very muchly.

--Jen

This is cute, funny, & also slightly sexual? Maybe I just have a dirty mind. Whatever. It made me laugh.

I liked this! It flowed very well and was amusing.

bizarre, but okay. it made me chuckle. and looking at it a second time its still humorous.

Shel Silverstein-esque poetry has never been so mathy! Honestly, I didn't know you were still writing. Good rhythm and flow and everything, even if it did remind me of 8th grade math class.