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| CHIIJOY 2007-06-19 ch 1,   | I liked this, especially 'the smell of laughter.' it reminds me of my friends too. good job. :) |
| first-casualty-of-war 2007-03-12 ch 1, | M this flowed very well. Nothing like some sweet flowing poetry. I think its length fit it perfectly; short poems are sometimes a lot better than long ones. Great job! P.S. thanks for the review!! |