This is beautiful. Morbid, sad, angsty at times, but beautiful. It's amazing how many perspectives there are to just one simple thing. But I suppose a scar like that does encompass a rather big deal, so it should be no surprise. Still find it amazing though.

Did she try to kill herself or something? The 2nd and 3rd chapter kinda gave me that impression, but in the 1st chapt when you said "she will wish she was never distracted that night", I kinda thought she accidentally cut herself. Though that totally doesn't fit into context, so I'm gonna guess you meant for that part to refer to the night she met him.

When is "the guy" 's persepctive coming? I wanna read that part! But if you planned for it to be the last chapter for the sake of drama and that 'oomph' effect, I don't mind. Just update soon, yeah?

Brilliant story but how did she get the scar was it like a `blood pact?` Beautifully written btw

please continue this story. i'm addicted!

Whoa. These stories are beautiful. I adore them. I can so easily relate, and I love the way that you tell the story; how you subtly weave past and present together, slowly adding in little hints about why she is scarred. Wonderful.

Very intriguing... I love how you describe everything so descriptively. I know how serious depression can be, and so this really got to me. I am really interested in finding more out about the "memory". Although, your sentences are sort of choppy, and I think that some of the shorter sentences could be joined to make compound sentences, which I think could help make them flow better. Anyways, excellent work!

I like the subtlety in describing the scar and the story behind it...it's not dramatic with all this emotional turmoil shoved in your face. It makes it more realistic and easier to relate to.

It's less than a 1,0 words and yet it is so complete on its own, even if you never write another chapter. (Though I hope you do, though you may have intended it to be a simple short.)

I like how you go back and forth between the past and present, weaving in the different storylines, making the picture slowly come together for the reader. It makes the impact more forceful and longlasting.

The last two lines are a great ending, heartbreaking as they are. Well done.