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Isarandel
2006-12-05
ch 1,
hugs for u, dear.
tot he would really let go... seems that tt's not the case.
:)
darknessblooms
2006-12-04
ch 1,
Those random pieces are usually the best ones I think.

I like the line: "Then you decided that you deserved more." - Gives a new and interesting viewpoint that people often fail to see.

I'm guessing by the last line that the feelings of love aren't returned? Maybe it's not really love on the part of the other person.

Nicely done.
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