 joyce ng 2009-02-02 . chapter 21 i love tis story of urs! jz d ending left me FRIGGIN' dissapointed! goodness! i actly read d whole 21 chapters@@ i'm dying to read abt summer's life in texas so please write more! n make sure it's a happy ending if not i'll come after u! u're vry informative. i was surprised at how much u knew abt horses. really impressed. keep it up! |
 starfire-crystal 2007-01-19 . chapter 21Boo yah!~ anyway this story it's really cool! i really liked it so much and i can't wait to read the next part abt.. when she goes to texas...i have a felling it's going to be really nice aswell...pls rite back (hehe)
~ur onli sister~ |
 babygal2 2007-01-17 . chapter 21 that was nice story, but about her b/f .. did he really lost his memory or he just wanted to break up..b/c the other girl was sitting there.. if he was really at lose.. then how come umm he remember the other girl..wel there wasn't anything said that he remember anything about her, but she was sitting there.. so he prob remember somethihng..if he's playing around..then he's a jack **... i would kick his ** out of his bed and teach him a leasson..and his father need a lesson too... that stupd ** * w/e need to be kicked in his head..lol... nice story by the way.. hope to read the next part.and the one u writing right now..ohh i got to run... latter.. :) |
 Ronica 2007-01-17 . chapter 21 As sad as that ending was, it was excellently done. I like that Summer stayed in character but she seemed to have a stregnth to her in this chapter, even though she was hurting. I am such a sucker for happy endings, however, this was done so well that I can't really complain. I am VERY happy that you plan on writing a sequel. I can only hope that there will be some fantastic reason for Anthony to be behaving like this, so that Summer can have her happy ending. It hurt to read that but I also appreciate the risk that you took ending this story as such. Look forward to seeing more of your writing. Thanks, Ronica |
 Luv-TU 2007-01-17 . chapter 21Can't wait for the sequal!! |
 Snow Wolf Alpha 2007-01-17 . chapter 21So Sad but interesting way of ending. Will we be seeing Anthony in the sequal?or will there be a new love interest?
Can't wait to read it.
Will be happy to wait. |
 babygal2 2007-01-10 . chapter 4 hey..nice story ...um i didnt understand ur grade system.. like ur in high schooll and why u have 5th or 6th grade then..i am from ny..and high school here is from 9th grade to 12th grade.. i am in 12th... soo...anyway..i just didn't get that part...keepp up tho... and i think u have some just typo errors...its not many. |
 Ronica 2007-01-09 . chapter 20 What? Well, Anthony was a JERK and then he saved her. I'm not really sure what to think. It will be interesting to see where you take things from here. I am a little concerned though with Summers reaction. Her reaction to him kissing Crystalline makes me wonder. She sees him kissing her and is still trying to convince herself that he wouldn't cheat on her and leave her? She seemed so passive. The lack of confrontation with him and calling him on his crap, it is even him that approaches her and not the other way around. At the end she should be concerned about his well being but I don't want him getting hurt to automatically cancel out what he did. You have given her a bit of confidence and spunk, I don't want to see her lose it. Hope you don't mind my opinion. I am really liking the story and look forward to reading more. |
 liys 2006-12-23 . chapter 1 sorry...my review for the second chapter was just what was wrong! i meant to add that: i love the characters--they're very distinct and the language you use to describe them is great. :D |
 liys 2006-12-23 . chapter 2 okay...well maybe i'm just overly tired but it seemed to me that u said in this story that they go to miami high, but they had miss leandra for a FOURTH grade bio teacher? and now they have her again in FIFTH grade? hmm... i dont know about that... |
 Luv-TU 2006-12-20 . chapter 14I like it! |
 zah 2006-12-20 . chapter 14nice going i really like summers character pretty classicall anyways waiting for the next chapter. |
 Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-15 . chapter 5Ah, a compliment from a maestro. She ought to be awesome. |
 Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-15 . chapter 4Ah, the ever wonderful musical auditions. Wonder how she's going to do. |
 Da Vinci at Work 2006-12-15 . chapter 3You know, when someone asks somebody else out, usually they just go, "Oh, I'll think about it" or "Er, who are you?"
Anyhow, nice chap, a little short though. :D |