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| Jon Emery 2006-12-23 ch 6,  | abuseWintry, whimsical, wonderful... The artful language has a gentle comic effect and the brief asides about your various characters are very cleverly inserted. No idea where the storyline is going, but your style is lovely. |
| Cass Boothe 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI really like the tone you've created. |