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writer.of.stars.
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abusehello :] I love this story and cant wait to read this along with the newer versions, but please dont delete this one yet. I want to read it.
the kitten
2008-04-11
ch 48,
abusecan't you let this be, please? (not delete it, I mean)
I liked this version of the story, and even if you're making a new and improved version of it, I would still like to be able to read the old one
thanks
kitty
Jenc11
2008-04-01
ch 47,
abuseOh wow, this will be really confusing... But it's your story, so feel free to do whatever you want. I'm looking forward to reading it.
Maranwe Telrunya
2008-04-01
ch 47,
abuseAw, sad. But good luck in re-writing!

~Maranwe
Kim Bell
2008-04-01
ch 47,
abuseI actually agree with you. I was majorly unhappy with the way Bekah and Dan were acting for nearly the entire story.

I'm sure it will be hard to let go of all that work, but it's probably still a good idea to begin again. :]
Breeze x0
2008-04-01
ch 47,
abuseI like your new ideas & I support you! :)
adnama3121
2008-04-01
ch 47,
abuseActually, I think that would be a good idea because I kind of hate how Dan still treats Bekah like a kid, he should see her as a grown up, she's married, has a kid and went through an terrible event and lived. He shouldn't see her as a kid because despite being 18, she's very mature and responsible. She may act like a kid sometimes but he takes things too far, he can't tell her what to eat and what to do. I think he should be away for a couple of years so that next time he sees her, he thinks of her as an adult. BUT...you should just delete the entire page so that people can review, 'cause if you don't start it over people who reviewed before won't be able to for the first 47 chapters, you know?
~Amanda~
Liz
2008-03-31
ch 47, anon.
abuseI think that you should do whatever you think is best. I enjoy reading all of your stories, and I would prefer it if you kept this up so that people can read it, but it would also be interesting to read another version where you twisted the variables a little bit and made the story go from there. I'm not American, so this story - although frankly it is more of a novel! - is a wonderful insight into life in the US.

I look forward to reading your future works,
-Liz
Lili
2008-02-29
ch 46, anon.
abuseLovely.
I hope you update soon!
:]
Montag451
2008-02-25
ch 46,
abuseI just wanted to say that I am really enjoying this story! I'll be waiting for the next update!

PS - I still don't trust Oliver!
XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX
2008-01-25
ch 46,
abuseomg! ur back! welcome back! to this story any way. haha. I absolutely love Bekah and her sassy attitude! reminds me of my friend who I am very close to! please update soon! can't wait to read the next chapter!
Maranwe Telrunya
2008-01-24
ch 46,
abuseaw. Cute ending.

Haha, Dan's reaction was funny.

And her little thought about fear to anger to hate to the dark side reminded me of Star Wars. And made me laugh.

Good chapter! Waiting for the next update!

~Maranwe
Maranwe Telrunya
2008-01-24
ch 45,
abuse"her complexion glowing from the facials she’s " little typo - she's. :)

Nadine the Ice Queen. LOL. It even rhymes.

Why so mysterious, Dan? Cute little chapter! I'm glad Bekah is trying at least to get along with her mom in law.

I loved the journal entries, especially "Perfect love casts out all fear"

~Maranwe
Kim Bell
2008-01-23
ch 46,
abuseDefinitely more about Allison. I love her. :]

Anyway, I think that it would be just a little awkward having your father-in-law with you for that. I'd be pretty creeped out.

And I was a little confused about what Dan's trying to do. Whatever it is, it doesn't seem like a good idea.
Kim Bell
2008-01-22
ch 45,
abuseHeehee, cute room! It's also nice to see that Nadine's loosening up a little. I was feeling sorry for her since she wasn't included. Even though she's the Ice Queen. :]
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