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| Tess 2008-08-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseAw! They are soo cute! |
| Brizlack 2008-06-27 ch 7,  | abuseXD That story was truly entertaining! I loved it from start to finish! |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-20 ch 7, | abuseAw awsome story! xx |
| Felix02 2008-02-02 ch 7, | abuseI do so love your romantic stories. They are such thrilling little epics. I do have to say I wish they were longer, but then again I think it would take away from the brevity of the stories which make them so interesting and beautiful. Thank you for writing them! |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-24 ch 7, | abusethis has a cute ending, but could you not end there? could you add an epologue and have them ten, twelve years later and how they are doing? thanks for posting this story. it was a great read. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-24 ch 6, | abuseI bet i know who it is... =] |
| Katherine-the-greate 2007-12-29 ch 5, | abusehow sweet. I can't wait to read more. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2007-12-29 ch 4, | abuseOne thing i would recommend is to change the other woman's name to something not so close to Lucilla. things you omight wish to review: -hadn't give him her answer (given) |
| Katherine-the-greate 2007-12-29 ch 3, | abuseOkay, I have to ask- do you capatolize Butler to say it as his name or is it an accident? great work things you might wish to review: -little while long, though (longer) - keep you out but really (YOU) must stop meddling in -somehow it has got out that you (gotten) -who sees your face doesn’t (whoever) |
| Katherine-the-greate 2007-12-29 ch 2, | abuseGreat ending to this chapter. I love Theodore. He's so cute and so childishly blunt. :) things you might want to review: -Lucilla had learnt to fence (learned) -And I could you out for the |
| Katherine-the-greate 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abusegreat first chapter. i really like the chem. between your characters. things you might want to consider: -Carriages break wheels-they don't bread down like cars do -The owner was a head taller than her =(she) -It seems that your driver had recovered (has) |
| cinnamon-24 2007-09-08 ch 7, | abuseI love it! An incredible story! I want to read more of your work! I wonder what happens to her brother Theodore... |
| cinnamon-24 2007-09-08 ch 6, | abuseAbroad! Or maybe not |
| cinnamon-24 2007-09-08 ch 5, | abuseYay! Me gusta Edward! |
| cinnamon-24 2007-09-08 ch 3, | abuse*Sigh* I want and Unsavoury Character like that! hehe |