I do so love your romantic stories. They are such thrilling little epics. I do have to say I wish they were longer, but then again I think it would take away from the brevity of the stories which make them so interesting and beautiful. Thank you for writing them!

this has a cute ending, but could you not end there? could you add an epologue and have them ten, twelve years later and how they are doing?

thanks for posting this story. it was a great read.

I bet i know who it is... ]

how sweet. I can't wait to read more.

One thing i would recommend is to change the other woman's name to something not so close to Lucilla.

things you omight wish to review:

-hadn't give him her answer (given)

Okay, I have to ask- do you capatolize Butler to say it as his name or is it an accident?

great work

things you might wish to review:

-little while long, though (longer)

- keep you out but really (YOU) must stop meddling in

-somehow it has got out that you (gotten)

-who sees your face doesn’t (whoever)

Great ending to this chapter. I love Theodore. He's so cute and so childishly blunt. :)

things you might want to review:

-Lucilla had learnt to fence (learned)

-And I could you out for the

great first chapter. i really like the chem. between your characters.

things you might want to consider:

-Carriages break wheels-they don't bread down like cars do

-The owner was a head taller than her (she)

-It seems that your driver had recovered (has)

I love it!

An incredible story! I want to read more of your work!

I wonder what happens to her brother Theodore...

Abroad! Or maybe not

Yay! Me gusta Edward!

*Sigh*

I want and Unsavoury Character like that! hehe

Shvet! I like it!

That worked out nicely!

Wow! How refreshing! (Her I mean!) He needs to be taken down a notch!

Yay!

Love it!

i luv it!