Can you describe something as pretty? Cause that's what this reminds me of-pretty. I don't know. It probably doesn't make sense. It's late, but yeah, I liked it.

Very good point. I've read few good poems on the topic of loving two people: one more than the other, but still having some love left for that other. Good job!

Write on!

I like the lines and mental image of "the sunflowers stopped looking at the sun." Very pretty poem. :)