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Benjamin Santos
2007-04-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseyour poems are nice they make me feel different that life is not all about me like I thought it was.
HauntedMisery
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseI love this piece!
"i will be able to sleep soundly at night
with a smile upon my face
as long as you’re perfectly fine."
GORGEOUS three lines...I love the format and the words...excellent work as always, def. one of your best!
polka dots and addictions
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseah this is lovely =]never heard the song, but ill see if i can find it somewhere. fifth stanza is my fave, & i love the whole flow of this, its gorgeous. the whole simplicity & somewhat desperation (which i dont know if its just me but i am certainly picking some up) of this piece is beautiful,keep writing m'dear.~Bex xx
Hidden Lies
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseI like this a lot, I'll be sure to download and listen to the song.
K's Moonshadow
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseThis one is good, I like it. The concept is very true, often we worry more about our love then ourselves. And now I'm wanting to discover this band you're talking about... hm... lol

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*
dress her up in fairytales
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abusealthough you say this is inspired by a chiodos song, this reminds me so much of a my chem song and would actually make a good song in general. & i can feel the hurt, the urge, the yearning in this piece & it's vaguely beautiful ... wonderful.
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