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| Nemonus 2008-07-16 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting! There's some very eye-catching fantastical imagery here ("a thousand eyes"). (Nice pre-poem note too, LOL!) Some lines had very good, absolutly beating rhythm (the second stanza, and "watching, waiting...in motion".) The rhythm elsewhere was pretty good too. |
| The Sun and Shadow 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm not generally impressed by poetry, but this one was simply gorgeous. I am truly jealous of your skills. Nice word choices, GREAT imagery! Well done. |
| braindead1345 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is great! Ilove the image of a exioct flower rising above the wind blown sands... |