very well written ^_^ I like the double-diction with the other guys voice as well, and the ending with the responses was very effective =)

I must comment. Your use of italics for internal thought and short sentences are typical Justinian writing. It like it. It works for this quick, painful one-shots.
On the other hand, it sometimes works against you in your longer pieces.

Like I said, you're really growing as a writer. I can't point out any one or two things that I liked the most, which is unusual for me, but this entire piece fits together so well. I like the turning point and the end especially, because they really are the unreasonably reasonable bits of a crazy truth. Tres magnifique, Francois.

The descriptions are so detailed. You can feel and understand what the character is going through. It also makes you want to learn more about the story.

Ah... this makes me feel all tingly inside. xD

I really like the two closing lines.