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| xanthofile 2007-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseit 'was' cheesy and sort of rambling on and on. >< nonetheless, i found myself laughing at the end (that i feel would have been stronger if he had just died) and it was the good kind of laugh. so, no flame from me, but perhaps a threadbare review regardless. i apologize for that. |