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plumblossom
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuseI hope you don't mind a review coming so long after you wrote this. Anyway, I like this. And you're right to end it right there, when the reader is thinking "more!" because nothing that comes after would ever be so right as this.
his-skinnyDOLL
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abuseThis was odd, fasinating, and kinda cute. Very original - probably the first story I've ever read about a pair of crazy people. I liked it.
i-see-faeries
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseWow. This was amazing and somehow all I'm wondering is how much research this took? I love it. All the terms just make it real. And while it's a bit hard to follow, you get it. Great job. And the ending is nice. ;D
Aquafied
2007-05-08
ch 1,
abuseyou know what
damn you for putting in so many words i had to look up
and this is good
and sad. very sad.


you need to write more. your stories are addicting.
Luciver
2007-05-05
ch 1,
abuseSo, I'm thinking you should send me the 40 different versions of "never ever ever did." Because that's my favorite story by you, by far.

AND AND AND.

I wanted to tell you: because of your stories, I now listen to cold war kids, and have read mysterious skin/own the movie.

/stalking.
Limited Edition
2007-02-25
ch 1,
abuseNathan sounds more paranoid to me than schizophrenic. Schizophrenics often see things that aren't real, they aren't scared of things or paranoid. A schizo might see a horse just standing there, or believe that trees talk to them or sing so he has to chop them down and so on. I love Travis' personality! He's awesome XD

Mwah this story is so damn cute! The dialogue is incredible, I love it. Very realistic. Good job!
nighthuntress05
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abuseI'm both cyclothymic and bipolar as well as having social anxiety disorder and I think you did a wonderful job of both showing the treatment of the mentally ill by thier families (dumping them off on someone else) and by healthcare workers (medicine for all). Its sad that just because so called 'normal people' don't understand the mentaly ill they are treated like lower class citizens when in reality, all we want to do is be ourselves and be happy. Wonderful story.
magalina
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was amazing. I love your writing. 12 monkeys was an awesome movie!
Account no longer used.
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseI liked it very much^^
Algae
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseIt's well written and a unique storyline :) I look forward to reading more!
Painted Desert
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is good so far. Keep writing! And soon please. Oh, one more thing, be careful with Wikipedia, because that information is not always accurate. You should try Brittanica (sp?).
Em
super happy nuclear girl
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseOh! I really loved this one :] one of your best maybe. I love the description of Travis's brain, with the wires and the string and the strips of tinfoil. It was perfect, wonderful imagry.

You've managed to foil wrap some good characters there, they were very moving and very realalistic. :] well done.
obsidiandreams
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseI really like your writing style, and your characters. Very nice. :)
Professional scatterbrain
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseGreat begining, I really enjoyed your charactersations of Travis and Nathan. I can't wait to read more.
Griezula
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abuseI think I've found a new favorite to obsess over! :D Yay! I feel accomplished. And you should too. Because this is awesome. You're awesome for writing it. ;3
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