Hey there, Outlaw-2 here,

I must say, this was really a very good chapter. The sense of loneliness was intact, and the atmosphere you created added the punch to it. Though characters like this are pretty much of a clique, you made it to a point that it felt refreshing instead; something new. This story will be in my favourites then. And why not drop by to my profile once in a while? Hope some of my stories would entertain you as well. :P

Sincerely,

Outlaw-2

Great work. The narrative's really quite good. Azelia's very strange, but late nights, clock checks, loud noises, bright lights, comfort in sleepless dark- these things I completely understand, and it's really drawing me in to her character. The execution here is excellent.

wow that was...wow...thats all i can say about it...just wow...keep up can't wait till next chapter!

wow that was just great...i like this one more than i like the first one which i liked alot! keep it up

that was really really good...that was just...wow...great job keep up the good work...also can u check out my stories thanks

I like it. You have talent. ]