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| dream789 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusevery very good. are you going to write more, because it very very good and well thought out |
| Midnight Destiny 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseCool. Nice descriptions. But the ending was a little abrupt. Btw, mayb u shld put the " * " sign where there's a time period difference. It looks weird otherwise. |