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Reviews For: The Smile Widens

x-princessa-temnoti-x
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuseAww...
Matt Miller
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseYAY! a gay story with a happy ending. it is perfectly flawless
Rinoa 'Artemis' Selvara
2007-01-24
ch 1,
abuseWonderful. I LOVED it. Althrough I will say that you need to edit this a bit more. Watch your spelling and such. Other then that it was truly well written. Keep it up.
~Rinoa
The Golden Viper
Isidris Gry
2007-01-04
ch 1,
abuseCute! I love the picture of him laying on the roof with dew in his eyelsashes and on his hair!
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