My favorite part is the thingie with the smash and the random letters! Uh... I'm not a previously used word in that sentence.

Nah. I never finished looking through all of your novel. I meant to, but Arby's started to steal my life, then more writing and editing and then more of other stuff. Like college. I'll have time in July? *shrugs*

James cooper of AZ Demons was the inspiration for the accented guy in my story. The only one with an accent. Silly. I'm going to stop, now. But still. Trevor's comment was funny.

Well just finished.. Pretty good for plot and way its written. I can't really help you much with opinion on our group only Tim was featured to a judgement degree but you got him down well.

I'm not exactly sure what happened at the end of chapter 3, I'm sure its something extreme whatever it is.

Pretty good action, the bullets melting before hitting Flare is cool, though its abit implausible since it would require such a great heat that it would probably destroy everything in a rather large radius.

I've got a question, don't the people at the facility know Flare? If Wallace knows him, then I would think he'd be a welcomed guest.

Well I'll keep checking out the rest of your stories. It seems you need to read them all to know whats going on.

Sincerely,
Sbiis Saibian

That novel was super fantantastic awesome!

Yes! I finially have finished reading the remaining chapters and now I get to reveiw...

I would have to say, really awesome (sorry, vocabular is down for the moment) 50,0 word story. I don't know how you didn't go insane trying to meet the deadline. So, I don't know what to say right now since my brain's bummed out, but if I think of anything, I'll post it on one of the earlier chapters which counts as a reveiw so... idk what that means but I'll think of it later. Anyway, the ending was unexpected and I don't know how to describe this besides using my current (and only appropriatly positive) adjective, 'Awesome'

Heh, I wonder how you got the idea of AU Luke and his friends writing a 50,0 word novel... By the way, how's that goin' fo ya? ^_^ Anyway, I WILL read more for sure when you publish it.

Oh yeah, HOW THE HECK DID YOU MANAGE TO ACCOMPLISH TO WRITE 10 CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY!? (Sorry for the cpas lock)

Woah, confusing space-time continum stuff... O_o

I got bored by the second paragraph. Granted, it was well written...

Cool story; you mentioned this guy in one of the other stories (Memory blank; algebra tests does that to one). But, what is a milk bag? I can't really imagine a bag of milk... but anything's possible I guess. Anyway, I'll reveiw after reading 2-10...

Oh, good work so far! I'll have to go read more in a bit. I participated in NaNoWriMo too (most stressful fun I've had all year).