"I know I need her but I don't know why"

Very accurate.

"I never liked winter before I met her"

True, completely true. I will read some of your other stories soon. Some good lines in here.

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The mom in this story sounds like my own, except she and i live 1200 miles apart and haven't spoken since august. i guess it's the only way we tolerate each other.

So far, so good.

-Opti

The different ways of commiting suicide actually make me sick to my stomach. That's a complement because it means that I can actually imagine them just based on your description. This chapter made me curious about the rest of the story. Why does she hate her mom? Why does she visit her if she does? why is her mom so depressed? What's the history? Great story, please update soon!

wow, that's so beautiful. I love your description. In the beginning, when you describe sadness and crying, it's amazing. the butterfly metaphor, and everything. So amazing. I love this story, it makes me happy. You write it so beautifully, poetically.

I like the beginning. It drags you into the story, because unlike some authors, you don't give away the first chapter in your summary. This was a great beginning, and I hope to see more!

-Opti

That was beautiful, there was so much raw emotion in her words. I could feel her anxiety in the beginning, and as she filled with happiness, it was so clearly conveyed. Everything had this dreamy feel, almost like a gigantic poem. Keep up the good work, you're made a really captivating story.