Very sensual, but somehow..wrong, and disturbing. (Not the poetry, but rather the feeling the poem gives me.) Perhaps because, no matter what, it isn't "her" after all? Slightly incoherent, but apt, perhaps, for this situation. Interesting. Is there an allusion to death, or is the "angel silent and still" something else completely?

Zhai'helleva, Stille'sawola,
~jenn~