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| LEDlorien7 2006-12-10 ch 1,   | wow... that's quite a story. I love how you don't tell us what happens. Just one thing, you don't have her parents come into this story at all. I know that if it was you, they wouldn't, but for a "good Catholic girl" parents would probably have quite a large role in this stuff. But it's your story, so you know... I really like it! |