dude, that was intense. but like, amazing. It reminds me of something Kurt Cobain would've written. (which is a huge compliment, by the way)

whoaa that was really intense. i liked it

Wow, that was emotional. I'm speechless...And very few things manage to get me in that state.

OK cool

It's been a while. If this is any indication of how you've been lately then I'm sorry. It was really emotional, well written, unlike most "emo" things I usually read. Most suck, this didn't.

Don't be a stranger, keep it up, I'll try to write/read more!

- Krazie Klepto

Dark and flowing, dripping with hasty emotion and just a little hint of sweet sadism. Delicious.

I liked this song. I guess you have to move on after rejection.

~SirScott

I don't read that much of anything anymore, but I'm glad I found this. This was some deep **, man. You must've been feeling something ** up when you wrote this. Whatever it is, just keep your head up. Most stuff isn't as bad as it seems when you look back on it, so don't go jumping off a bridge or anything.

Love, peace, and triangle... (don't know what the triangle is for)

Dice Darwin