I was woundering when you're going to update.

Oh, sad:(

Wow, I really liked this. It definitely did remind me of my stories, now I feel as though I'm going to be copying you to keep going on mine. Hope you don't mind, I promise I really wasn't. Heh, anyways. Very well written, it kept enough things open for the mind to play with.

I like your abuser. He's very considerate. I love how he's unaware of his illness when he's hitting her but painfully aware only afterwards, very well portrayed in that sense, I think.

I like the comment about how he wants her to think he's a monster, but then she's still crying why he leaves. So pretty. I think I feel sorry for the abuser and not the victim... Strange how points of view can do that.

You only seem to get better with the time!
Lately you're writing more emotional stuff, like completly angsty and full of tragedy, and the best part is that you are fucking good at it.

I love the way you've shown the other side of the tipical abuse tale. Everything i've read so far only tells what the one abused feels and thinks, not giving much importance to the abuser (is that the word?), but your story gets a lil in the psiquis of the abuser and it fits perfectly.


Ah, I MISS YOU SO MUCH!
dany me encanto de verdad!!
I love you!

'Why' is a damn good question!

On antoher note, I am sad you're not updating your toher stories. I adore Profe, and I also thought you were planning on continuing with Mikaya, as you seemed to be nutting out his history in yoru eljay. I hope your inspiration returns!

Aww.