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| paper bell 2007-02-25 ch 1,  | abusewow. i think this is a nice poem. i was a bit annoyed at how you broke the words with spaces--i was kind of distracted. but hey, this is still a nice work. and i just liked the insomnia thingy. good work. keep writing. (: ` lv;svnsks. |
| Guardrail 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written and awesome imagry. I loved the line, "With insomnia walking along your neck". Amazing work and keep writing. |