Not really, not QUITE yet, right?

Well-done.

"Never to ever recur" -I know you were dealing with the whole syllable thing, but this seemed a little redundant. I like the idea, though. I can't write haikus to save my life, so I definitely salute you for that.

Too, short, but that's not the point. In your poem, "The Different Girl" or whatever it was called. I don't know exacty how your friend felt, once I read it over and saw the word gender. Sorry about the confusion, but I just thought I'd let you know!

Simplicity at it's best, this was lovely.

..a cycle.. just like a dying forest then springs a new one again after a century...

nice...

very interesting.

i like it.

Interesting thought. The end to the end...most people talk about the end of the beginning or the beginning of the end, very interesting concept. Good job, God bless.