that was a real cool poem. I just wrote one myself today. Its also about a relationship but anyway I just wanted to say your poem rox and have a great day.
:)

OMG this was awsome! way better than how i write. keep it up

it is good. i think you need to take out the sunburn part. it is so over used

Good poem. The ryming is obvious, yet not dumb or forced. The poem flows well, and I can feel the emotion. Perhaps the topic is overdone; I've written one too many unrequited love poems myself, but this was still nice.

i've told you i love it. it's beautiful and meaningful and it illustrates the girls feelings amazingly. absolutly wonderful.