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| notreal17 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseomg that was even worse then the first one! but it was still very good writing! good good! |
| A. C. Oasis 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is so moving, snd beautiful. The way the scene is built up slowly, with the use of character and description is just amazing, simply amazing. I wish I could write like this. Maybe you could give me some tips? |