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| ohthevoices 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseI agree wholeheartedly. Poetry is such a good way to get a point across, isn't it? |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseI hate Bush too. I have always hated him. Anyway, I would have to say this is well written, and I agree with you. I am like saying, "Go Sarah! You Rock!" Well, in my head anyway. I am going to add this to my favorites. Best Wishes |
| Mocking Laughter 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuseSo true! This is excellent poetry, and it's not about something idiotic that's not going to affect anyone's lives, like rainbows, or butterflies, or stupid stuff like that. --The Light Is Gone. All Is Lost |
| Sting Ferdinand 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI like how you signed your name at the bottom. I don't know if it's your real name [nor do I care], or if you've done this with all your works, but it kind of adds - I don't know, class to your poem. I'm not saying that your poem is not classy, but the name kind of makes the whole poem more sincere. Interesting you call it a 3rd war - 3rd world war, you mean? Also, I like how you give *reasons* for not liking Bush's policies [which I think it's obvious you don't]. Being a not-Bush liker myself, I don't mind when people rant about him, but it's much more intelligent, rational and overall better for everyone - in my opinion - if you're willing to say why. |
| LovetheMadness 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abusenicely put and undeniably TRUTHFUL. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseYou've taken a real emotion and put it into poetry form. Cool. The rhyming is good. You've succeeded in making this poem flow well. Nice job. |
| celentia 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abusegood one! bush is a bastard! i live in england but this whole war is so stupid, we've got tony blair and he's just arse licking bush all the time! the poems good, i like the way you ask questions and the sarcasm. good. |