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| little-chibi-girl 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abusewow I liked the beginning part, it adds flavor to it, and it shows you spent time on it. Just a thought, take it or leave it but at the end, after the last chorus you could do it again like this: "and I made my dreams come true And I showed all of you When you heard them announce my name And so now you, so Now you know I’ve achieved fame" but either way I really like it! |
| Arafax 2006-12-09 ch 1, | abusewow..you are a good song writer! Much better than I at any rate. Keep up the great work! |
| Mrs.Teacup 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseLoved it!! You're doing a great job writing songs! Keep up the good work! |