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Reviews For: Make My Dreams Come True

little-chibi-girl
2007-01-26
ch 1,
abusewow I liked the beginning part, it adds flavor to it, and it shows you spent time on it. Just a thought, take it or leave it but at the end, after the last chorus you could do it again like this:
"and I
made my dreams come true
And I showed all of you
When you heard them announce my name
And so now you, so Now you know
I’ve achieved fame"

but either way I really like it!
Arafax
2006-12-09
ch 1,
abusewow..you are a good song writer! Much better than I at any rate. Keep up the great work!
Mrs.Teacup
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseLoved it!! You're doing a great job writing songs! Keep up the good work!
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