Reviews for The Last Fairy Tale

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Hi 2008-11-16 ch 1,	Hi, I really like this so far. I am reviewing because I really don't think you should give up on this story or anything. It's great! I usually don't even start to read incomplete stories because I know I will be depressed when they suddenly disappear, or even worse - just sit there and rot. But this one was just too interesting to resist. Please update soon!
chocolaterain 2008-09-20 ch 1,	I just happened to look at the character pictures and I love them both... Landon's picture is very...pretty? I love it a lot but I don't know if I should call it hot or cute or pretty or what. Anyways I hope you update this story. Please don't give up on it!
MidnightblueAurora 2008-07-31 ch 43,	Well...I'm back! I kinda left for a while but I've returned and progress has been made! yay! lol. Ok as everyone is saying, i love the Tess and Ladon pairing...i don't think they're cute rather, they're...realistic...you know with Tess still having a bit of the dmsel in distress air and Ladon wanting to do everything to help her...I'm concerned though, because i think Tess is taking a bit too long to grow up. I mean i know she has a whole lot on her plate but...she still seems a bit too childish...just a teensy weeny tiny bit. Still loving Ladon! And yes, the Ona/Favien pairing would definitely be one of my all time favourites in this story...oh and please, don't let Tess end up with Mikhal, she may be naive but she's better than that. I don't think she's quite worthy of Ladon yet, just to become a bit more mature would be good, just a bit. Generally though, you have the pacing down pat (although i must say i prefer the other chapters than these last few ones with Mother Goose and stuff...), the writing is good and overall keep up the good work...
kingdomfantasyanime453 2008-02-16 ch 39,	wow... this chapter reaveld alot... i never suspected this... you surprise me everytime... i really love this... you really should update... they almost kissed! ur story is what i have beening looking for its so uniqe please UPDATE
anwrootbeer 2008-02-10 ch 43,	Haha, you've won me over on Redd with Wolfe. And do you want any constructive criticism? If you do, I'm confused on some of the wording. In the second paragraph, do you mean 'Rebelling just to rebel,' meaning 'Rebelling just for the sake of rebelling?' The rest of that sentence is a bit confusing to me, as well.. 'He didn't believe in just be accepted wasn't doing anyone a lick of good' is a run on sentence if I am correct. And when it says 'it was clear sailing to the stone structure,' could you mean 'smooth sailing?' I'm not familiar with 'clear sailing.' Just my input if you'd like it. You said before that Disney's Hercules wouldn't really be into this, but I absolutely love a Persephone/Hades pairing. Hades makes me giggle like a fangirl. But not the whole 'kidnap' thing and with Persephone royally unhappy. There are records of stories w/ Persephone content with the Underworld, so it doesn't have to be a sob story X3 Seems a bit of a stretch to incorporate, though, doesn't it? No matter, I like the pairings you put in.
kingdomfantasyanime453 2008-02-10 ch 43,	i love this story! i have never read anything like this before... this a great story... i love your tess and lladon pairing they're cute.. i would loved to read the next chapter... this is only a draft...? well i love ir... hope you UPDATE SOON
Aurain 2008-02-09 ch 26,	Cool. It's Cinderella this time, Not bad. I guess that it will be the Little mermaid the next time. Let's see first...
Aurain 2008-02-09 ch 23,	I really like it when u add fairytale elements into the story. It makes everything more interesting and I look forward to how you alter each fairytale to suit your story.
Aurain 2008-02-09 ch 21,	I like the part where Landon revealed that he was a dragon. I dunno why though :/ I tink I like the Frog Princess. I dunno why either.
Aurain 2008-02-09 ch 19,	Good job! I have just finished the first book and I must say that it is downright delicious! ^^ I will be connituing to read and reviewing. Haha. No worries!
Aurain 2008-02-08 ch 1,	The first chaper doesn't tell me much, but from wat i hav read from your summery, it's going to be quite interesting. ^^ The first chapter is very well writen. Much better then wat i could hav wrote. Good job! Pls read and review my story too! thanks
Long Lost Dream37 2008-02-07 ch 43,	HOORAY FOR REDDXWOLFE FLUFF!!
wilko4523 2008-02-07 ch 43,	wow this is really, gd, glad to see you've started updating again-had to reread to jog my memory but that just adds to the enjoyment! a few points-like you said in ur authors notes you would have wanted to do more on flavian and ona-i think that would be gd-because at the moment it is too focused on the Tess and Landon plot line-and i think it would benifit from some longer sub-plots-perhaps have a letter/s form Ona explaining her continuing reltaionship with Flavian, and perhaps do something with Thumbelina and King Furnor -another point is that although u have developed the charachters in this book well-such as beau peep and wolfe-it is not really so in book 2 such as blanche-u dont really get a chance to see any other sides of her charachter. I also felt that you should have some communication about what was going on with Blanche and alton (soz cant really remeber his name-know it began with an a so...lol) also at some points especially in book 2-the narration seems to be slightly monotonous but i put this down to the fact that you wrote it when u were younger as book three shows a considerable improvement on this! anywayz this is an extremely gd, original and intresting piece of work and plz keep updating! i want to know ur depiction of wonderland! it always marked be as a scary extremly strange place and not wonderous at all lol congrats on the 10,0+ views virtual hugz back lol update soon and sorry for writing this ridiclusy long review i always seem to do that on stories i like lol! anyway keep writing and update soon! wilko x
Enaid 2008-02-07 ch 43,	i luv snow white and her dwarf (srry i forget his name) although i didnt rlly like her at first she kinda grew on me. and ona/ favien is up there to
FocacciaBread 2008-02-06 ch 43,	Uwaa... I saw you updated, and was really happy about that- Redd and Wolfe have been my favorite characters so far (actually, the whole Lubelia arc has really been amazing), so I just hope that there's a bit of a WAFF scene coming up with them. By the by, I think that Redd is a better way to spell it, instead of just the traditional "red"- people who say that you're just self-inserting are mindless. ANYWAY... if you could include The Snow Queen in any way shape or form, I would seriously worship you. That fairy tale is absolutely beautiful, and, hey, maybe it would go well with the mirror...? Just a suggestion. Happy writing! :)

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