Reviews for Ode to a banished king

no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-14 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is sad. It's one of those in the moment poems. I'm not sure how to describe it. I love the phrase "scattershot offspring." Interesting piece. Keep writing! :)
Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-12-07 ch 1,	abuseHow sad. Wow. It reminds me of people in the retirement center my grandmother lived at for a long time. Just a very disturbing thought. Good though. You definatly catch an audiences attention.