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Reviews For: Ode to a banished king

no.peace.los.angeles
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abuseWow, this is sad. It's one of those in the moment poems. I'm not sure how to describe it. I love the phrase "scattershot offspring." Interesting piece. Keep writing! :)
Sarah-Brighteyes
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseHow sad.

Wow.

It reminds me of people in the retirement center my grandmother lived at for a long time. Just a very disturbing thought.

Good though. You definatly catch an audiences attention.
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