Interesting poem. I love the conciseness of it. Just really clever word choice, and every word means something, as they should in a poem. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

Hm we have some nice vocabulary in this piece.

Original.

It reminds me of death. I dont know if that is what you were going for. "petrified ailments." It just says something died... or is about to... a coma.

I like the title though. Maybe thats why it struck me as odd. I would love to hear what inspired you to write this piece. Did you see something? Story? I am just curious.