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| sicklysnowwhite 2007-01-08 ch 1,  | abusevery gushy. not really my thing. the discription wasnt all that bad, definitly could have been better. i need another word for discription. it was good, if you like that sort of thing. |
| ShadowFane 2006-12-24 ch 1, | abuseLol. Aw!! Me likey! I love this! It's going on my fav's list! Great job! SF |
| Harper Bell 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseCute. :) |
| capriciousguy 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseunlocked! haha! i'm glad they stayed that way anyway if they didn't know it was locked. in the biginning, did you mean that they had their hands under each others shirts? yes i think so. i'm glad they find it so easy to touch each other, just in the couple-y sense and not in the sex sense... its a nice change. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was strange! I still loved it, even if the couple is sickeningly in love, like our good friends...were they the inspiration? I like the word puffy, but it's a fat word... |
| Tamara N. Menz 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was sp sweet! |