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| Loveless To Self 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI admit, the poem as a whole is a tad confusing, but it is truly well written. I didn't see any words that seemed out of place and you used detail but didnt go overboard with ti as many writers do, thinking it makes it better. Its well-written. I enjoyed it. |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusewow this is good. sad but good |
| Alyssa's Attic 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseOh A new poem hurray. The imagery is very good I like the last couple of lines and the fact that its written in first person but it is as if the "I" is like a force which I don't think I've ever seen before. So very different and unique bravo. Also did u get my e-card? Have a fantabulous xmas - Rhian ^^ |
| Rebellion Author 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuseInteressting. A little confusing though. Rebellion Author. |