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Reviews For: Comforting Icy Caress

Loveless To Self
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseI admit, the poem as a whole is a tad confusing, but it is truly well written. I didn't see any words that seemed out of place and you used detail but didnt go overboard with ti as many writers do, thinking it makes it better. Its well-written. I enjoyed it.
BrokenHeartedAngel
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abusewow this is good. sad but good
Alyssa's Attic
2006-12-20
ch 1,
abuseOh A new poem hurray. The imagery is very good I like the last couple of lines and the fact that its written in first person but it is as if the "I" is like a force which I don't think I've ever seen before. So very different and unique bravo. Also did u get my e-card? Have a fantabulous xmas - Rhian ^^
Rebellion Author
2006-12-07
ch 1,
abuseInteressting. A little confusing though.

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