aw its been so long since you update this its intreseting and well... u know hehe

oh...wow not only is this one super hot its also intriguing.I even read through all the little sq.s because such a story is so intriguing. I cannot wait until you write more.

OMG! What rotten luck this poor guy has...but then again, to others he's the luckiest guys in the world. Haha, Hope you decided to continue this again.

Yay! I'm so happy you have updated! I liked this chapter very much. Looking forward to more :)

aww poor Valley! Good thing Eiryan stopped, or I hate to see what Valley, and maybe Flicker, would have done to him!

another brief note, there's a bunch of weird markings in your sentences, don't know what the deal is there...

but other than that, great work! so glad ur slowly updating all your work! maybe King of Magic is next? *hint hint nudge nudge*

M... I love this story! Hope Frost and Valley will learn to get along... and maybe more? :D Anyway, whatever you plan I'm sure i'll enjoy.

awe! cute! i like the poem as well. good chapy up date again soon.

poor valley just another poor soul being made into a ** by that bastard...disgusting story

Woohoo u updated! and if the alien muses leave u again, u can just phone home! lol

wanna see some hot alienxhuman sex scenes! plzplzplz update when u get a chance!

love the story so far! keep up the good work ^^

Updates are like candies...u just can't get enough of them!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

update, this is really good!

Good chapter still trying to see the plot but good none the less keep up the writing.

your story is awesome!=D plze update soon!