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| darrena 2008-09-15 ch 5,   | Yay! I'm so happy you have updated! I liked this chapter very much. Looking forward to more :) |
| JtheChosen1 2008-09-14 ch 5, | aww poor Valley! Good thing Eiryan stopped, or I hate to see what Valley, and maybe Flicker, would have done to him! another brief note, there's a bunch of weird markings in your sentences, don't know what the deal is there... but other than that, great work! so glad ur slowly updating all your work! maybe King of Magic is next? *hint hint nudge nudge* |
| darrena 2008-01-14 ch 4, | M... I love this story! Hope Frost and Valley will learn to get along... and maybe more? :D Anyway, whatever you plan I'm sure i'll enjoy. |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2008-01-13 ch 4, | awe! cute! i like the poem as well. good chapy up date again soon. |
| jess 2008-01-11 ch 4, | poor valley just another poor soul being made into a ** by that bastard...disgusting story |
| JtheChosen1 2008-01-11 ch 4, | Woohoo u updated! and if the alien muses leave u again, u can just phone home! lol wanna see some hot alienxhuman sex scenes! plzplzplz update when u get a chance! |
| lonewolf967 2008-01-10 ch 3, | love the story so far! keep up the good work ^^ |
| JtheChosen1 2007-11-30 ch 3, | Updates are like candies...u just can't get enough of them! |
| merrymowmow 2007-08-23 ch 3, | I was wondering when you're going to update? |
| flojo22811 2007-06-01 ch 3, | update, this is really good! |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2007-05-09 ch 3, | Good chapter still trying to see the plot but good none the less keep up the writing. |
| rosiel 2007-05-08 ch 3, | your story is awesome!=D plze update soon! |
| jess 2007-05-08 ch 3, | Whoa ur updating super fast, thank u so much it's an honor to read your stories. This one has a great plot, well except for Eiryan having mulitple husbands I think that actially not fair to valley and the others and kinda selfish of him, but that's personal opinion. Your plot is super creative and so detailed your an amazing writer and wow valley can sing and dancer lucky! |
| Empress Satori 2007-05-08 ch 3, | Sugoi! Eiryan's husbands all sound like lovely men (except that frigid ** Frost, lol) and Valley's no exception. Talented singer and dancer!! I like Flicker already cuz, as he said, he's got the balls to stand up to Frost. Awesomeness! I can't wait for Ch. 4! |
| Ohmyitsabomb 2007-05-07 ch 3, | Yayee! Another update! Man I am lovin this! Tee hee, Eiryan is already so protective of Valley, it's so adorable... :D Still, why such somber lyrics for Valley's song? Can't wait to hear the backstory on that... Please, update soon! Awesome work! |